Showing posts with label spring preview. Show all posts
Showing posts with label spring preview. Show all posts

Wednesday, April 11, 2012

Critique: Spring Preview Cover redone and Tiger Hotel feature

Hey all! I have some exciting news. I have a job interview on Monday! I'm really stoked, and I also am freaking out trying to perfect the portfolio I am going to bring. In order to do so, I redid my Spring Preview cover. Incase you don't remember, there was a teaser to the (then) upcoming Eli Young Band concert. So I took a media photo from their website, as suggested by Jan and Theresa during my portfolio review before break, to create a new cover. Here's how it looks:

I'm pretty satisfied with it, although I would like to play with the typography a bit more. If you have any suggestions feel free to let me know!
I also have a second draft of my Tiger Hotel feature for tomorrow. Last time they suggest adding more photos, especially of the inside of rooms. They also gave me another page to work with which is greatly needed and appreciated. I am still loving my huge photo spread to open the feature, although I know it was a concern last time since it took up so much space for other potential photos. I'm hoping that with the amount of photos I added and the addition of the extra page I will be able to keep this spread intact. Let me know what you think!


Wednesday, February 1, 2012

Critique: Spring Preview

This past week my capstone had another competition where we each created a cover, splash page and spread for the Spring Preview issue of Vox. Overall, I think my work had some ups and downs.
My favorite part of my package was my cover. I decided to go with a spring cleaning theme, focusing on a garage sale type scene for my cover. I went with a very cartoonish feel, doing everything as illustrations. This is how my cover turned out:

I really enjoyed making the stories into things for sale, like the Eli Young Band guitar and Super Bowl football. It was a really fun cover to get to work on.
Unfortunately, I was not as pleased with my splash pages or spread. I ended up doing two splash pages, both using only typography, for this competition. In all honesty, I wasn't very happy with either, and I wish I had found a better way to do them. I was worried it would turn out too similar to the cover, so I chose to play solely with typography. I feel like it ended up giving off a retro vibe rather than a spring feel, though. Here are my two splash pages:


When it came to my spread, I wanted to keep the same color scheme as the splash page(s). I decided that, should I end up creating the issue, I wanted to break up the events by month. I think it's easier so that people could just go to the month they wanted information on and find it that way. I was very intent on making this an audience-friendly spread. Overall, I think the spread is alright. If I had found a more creative way to create my splash page I think I could have done a bit of a better job with the spread, but for what I was working with I feel I made the most of it. Here is how the spread came out:


Next week I will be starting to work on my cover options with my cover group. I will also be starting to work on my publish prototype, although we are still waiting to hear which magazines we will be working with. Finally, next weekend (the 11th) I will be working on my first department weekend for Vox. I'm really excited to get more work with the magazine.