Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Critique: iPad 02/09/12

Sorry in advance but these feature images are in reverse order, so please bare with me.
Last week I was in the first group of iPad app designers. The app is a weekly version of Vox that is transformed into a iPad application. I was in charge of the cover, TOC and afterlife feature package. Between creating the landscape and portrait versions of each of these I designed a total of 32 pages in 2 days. While we hit a few bumps in the process due to being the first group and some of the templates being wrong, it was a great experience. I really enjoyed the process and that you have a bit more freedom with designing. I have included my features in both landscape and portrait versions on here.
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LANDSCAPE















Overall I am pleased with the feature. It was nice because I was able to use the print version as a building block, for example I kept the splash page from print, but I was able to add my own touches. I used dotted lines with new story titles rather than the parenthesis that they used in print. I wish I had done a little bit more with the artwork. On a few pages all I had to use was a pull quote which wasn't ideal for my design. I wish I had time to create an illustration or find more photos.
I am pleased with my sidebars, however. I really like how the clouds turned out behind the text.
While I was extremely frustrated while working on the iPad, I really like the final product. I'm really excited to do my second issue in about two weeks.

2 comments:

  1. Oh wow. I have to say, I really love the way you treated both the sidebars and pullquotes. You put some really new life into a feature I thought was dead (hardy har har - no puns intended. really.). But seriously. The clouds on the sidebars are GORGEOUS - we had such a tough time figuring out what to do with them in print. Oh man. Did we ever. And the dotted rules are also a really great touch. Great work!!!!!

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  2. We are all really thankful that you and Whitney went first and paved the way for the rest of us. These look really great. Now that I have done the iPad, I think the most challenging part is having enough visual elements to make the page more than just text on a glowy screen. I agree with Lee Ann that I like the way you treated the sidebars, especially with the clouds - although I do wonder about the decision to go with clouds because I feel like they insinuate a state of heaven that I know not everyone agrees with. However that was not your decision at all. You did a great job. That for posting all of these.

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